@MercurialBeige @ai @hidden @vriska seconded - at the very least it should be enjoyable to read . if people put it down out of boredom or struggle to finish it that's a failure . but besides that idrk

@MercurialBeige @ai @hidden @vriska bad prose . if written well even like , textbooks can be fun . i think this comes down to avoiding either clunky sentences, or confusing paragraphs

@MercurialBeige @ai @hidden @vriska *i guess also if the actual story/topic is fascinating enough bad prose is permissable. what i really mean is that it should be readable enough you dont drop it

>my immortal
this is "bad" but it's really entertaining , & completely works in the style of the story . & honestly , you can tell what's happening , there's no ambiguity . sentences run on a bit but its really not that bad . sure its written at like a middle school level but the real offense is the trainwreck plot

@MercurialBeige @ai @hidden @vriska on chapter 7 this shit rocks